Starving Review: Hybrid (The Evolution Trilogy Book 1) by Vanessa Wester

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Hybrid by Vanessa Wester (Amazon, Smashwords)

As I hoped for some more book sales to fill my pantry, I was fortunate enough to get a new book to chow down on instead.  That’s right, it’s time for another Starving Review!

This week’s main course is Hybrid, the first book in a paranormal romance series, The Evolution Trilogy.  What you say?  The guy who writes superhero and wrestling fiction picking up a romance book?  To that I say, ‘Broaden your minds!  The Tale of the Tape had a huge romance sub-plot!  Plus I was starving!’.  As per my standards, I will do my best to make this review as spoiler-free as possible and to see this in the light of a fan of the genre in question.

Let’s start off by saying this: On a technical level, the writing is quite good.  The pacing, character development, and depth of story are well ahead of many of Hybrid‘s brothers and sisters in the paranormal romance genre.  On a personal relationship level, there are fewer contrivances and those that do come up fit into the well-worn tropes of the romance genre … in other words, they are things that the readers will want to see.  The inevitable romantic entanglements and love dodecahedrons fit together much more naturally than most books of this kind.

In fact, talking about the genre tropes, at first blush, Hybrid seems to be a standard, if better written, book of the type, very paint-by-numbers.  However, at about the quarter way mark, Ms. Wester eschews the paint brush and brings in an industrial car painting robot, setting it on ‘CRAZY’ mode.  That may sound bad.  It’s not.  In fact, it’s almost glorious in the insanity it reaps!

You see, Hybrid goes off the rails not in the sense of the personal relationships and characterizations, which remain solid, but in a very Silver Age comic book/1950s atomic horror kind of way.  As the paranormal species that is core to the book is introduced and explained, the book takes glee as it smashes basic conventions and sets up the world these beings live in and how they operate.  I can’t really go into details without major spoilers, but simply let me say that I, as a comic book fan, really loved the general crazy involved.  It is a good kind of crazy and one that, for a genre that generally has more angst that sense, delights in that as much as the interpersonal conflicts.

Another point where Hybrid bucks the usual paranormal romance formula is in the rather expansive range of characters and points of view it dances over, adding to the narrative depth.  Add on to that the fact that the main PoV character for large sections of the book is the male lead and you get another turn off the over-trod path of the first person, female lead formula.  Refreshing.

Now, Hybrid isn’t without flaws.  Sometimes the over-the-top elements become too much even for a lover of such things to take seriously.  One incident in particular involving a mass mental manipulation (that should be vague enough to dodge the Spoiler Police) really made me pause and the later explanation of it did nothing to make it better.  There is little action, which while not a requirement in this genre can add to it, and the overall dramatic and romantic tension is uneven at times.  There is a fair amount of world-building that goes on in this book and, while Wester does a fairly good job at weaving it in with the actual story, there is a bit on info-dumping and a few cringe-worthy scenes of ‘As You Know‘ exposition.  Final flaw: the sudden climax and twist to set up the next book comes out of nowhere at the last minute, though the epilogue sweeps in and salvages part of it with a clever bit of follow-up on foreshadowing early in the book.

Let’s bring it all together then.

Hybrid is a solid paranormal romance and a good start for it’s series of books.  There are some intriguing surprises and Vanessa Wester wisely is not afraid to blaze off of the over-used pathways other writers in this genre have tread, bringing about a gleeful insanity to the whole thing.  It’s not perfect, but it stands above the majority of this genre that I’ve read.  If you enjoy this genre, definitely give this a read.  If you don’t, you may still want to give it a shot.  The first book is free, after all.

FINAL VERDICT: **** (Vanilla on the outside, crazy mix of flavors on the inside)

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10 comments

  1. “Inevitable … love dodecahedrons….” Hokey Smoke, Bullwinkle! Your reviews want a reviewer! 😀

    Let’s see … over-the-top elements, uneven tension, data-dump, “Bob, your uncle,” and a Deus ex machina – but it gets 4 stars and Tutti-Frutti sprinkles. Hmm. I’ll have to scope this one out.

    1. The thing is … it’s so purposefully over the top it uplifts it from the ‘ho-hum’ of the typical by-the-numbers paranormal romance. Not to mention Wester is a solid wordsmith. No insane purple prose moments and the like so common to the genre.

      1. I don’t read that genre, so I’m not familiar with any examples of insane purple prose, although I naturally produce long, complicated sentences with big words, alliteration, adverbs, and other putatively purple no-noes. Irish journalists specialize in that kind of lyrical writing, and nobody on that side of the world complains about it.

        That’s why I suspect that the pejorative purple label is a cultural phenomenon associated with reductionist American writing gurus, who hallowed Hemingway when he happened to be in his Dick-and-Jane mode. I understand that he didn’t write that way all the time, and that some of his stuff doesn’t pass muster with the infamous Hemingway App: http://www.newyorker.com/books/page-turner/hemingway-takes-the-hemingway-test (and my post: http://wp.me/p30cCH-oz ).

        Just looked up Hybrid – oh, dear, it’s in THAT sub-genre…. Well, I’ll see your challenge, and raise you one…. 😉

  2. I didn’t have a chance to drop by until now and have just laughed my head off at the conversation! Love it… Yep, I hang my head – it is in THAT genre! BUT, in my defence I have a lot of male readers who enjoy it! How’s that for a shocker! Thank you, JB, for the amazing review. I will keep trying to come up with better… I have to admit that you made me blush by calling me a solid wordsmith! I’ll have that! Woo hoo 🙂

    1. No need to hang your head!

      The fact is genre is more often a weight that holds us down as authors. You wrote a great book and, really, a fun read that goes beyond the ‘genre conventions’ but how many people won’t look past the ‘oh, paranormal romance? Ho-hum’ to read it?

      Keep moving forward! Once I clear out my backlog of review books (if that ever happens @_@), I’d love to review the rest of the trilogy.

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