Book News: New Reviews, Continual Self-Improvement and a Shout-Out

A bit of news for tonight, folks.

First, some more reviews for Indomitable and Indefatigable!  Check them out here and here!

Second, it’s looking like we will be go for publishing Incorruptible by the end of the coming week.  I’m just waiting for a final round of input from my beta readers then we are all go.

Third, I received some incredibly insightful feedback on the start of Indomitable which is definitely my roughest start of any of my books.  I always knew there was something off about it but I could never figure it out to my satisfaction.  However, Sally Ember figured it out and now, now, I think I can finally make it perfect!  Or close to!

For that fact alone, she deserves a shout-out.  A bit ‘thank you’ is in order for you, Sally!  Anyone who is looking for editing help and writing insights should definitely drop her a line.  She’s worth the time and the money!

So, that’s that.  I am going to do a rewrite of the early chapters of Indomitable along with another full edit and, when that’s ready, I’ll use that as a point to shift it from free to paid.  I’ll be doing the same with The Opening Bell, with more edit and less rewriting, sometime shortly thereafter.

Expect a Starving Review in a day or two!  Until then, good luck and good writing!

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3 comments

    1. Yep! I imagine so … I just need to get those first sections fine-tuned. Sally’s input really opened my eyes to the issue (I had originally meant the books to be more like a ‘told tale’ with present day asides, but that just got muddled and entirely dropped. The elements of those initial attempts clutter the first few chapters) so I think I can make it golden now.

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