Never say that I am a man that does not take action in response to honest criticism.
Knowing that Indomitable never got a proper edit from outside sources and it was my very first full-length novel, I always knew it was unpolished. As several reviewers brought up to me the full extent of the problems, I started to seek a way to get a better review and edit done. Those efforts have finally born fruit, enhanced by my own expanded, professional editing experience, to produce a third edition of it.
Indomitable in its third edition is going live as we speak through Amazon, Smashwords, and Createspace (for the print edition). I believe it is already updated in Smashwords and should be ready through the other outlets over the next day or so.